A Father’s watching his so die of malnutrition
He is bloated
He is sick
He needs medical help
He needs a friend
He needs a hope
Why does he have to go?
In America this is not tolerated
Why is it here?
Why not an American boy?
Why my son?
Why?
These things are not my fault
I seek new employment tomorrow to get more money
To save him
If it’s not to late
But it is and he must go
Even if it was my choice
But it’s not
He is bloated
He is sick
He needs medical help
He needs a friend
He needs a hope
Why does he have to go?
In America this is not tolerated
Why is it here?
Why not an American boy?
Why my son?
Why?
These things are not my fault
I seek new employment tomorrow to get more money
To save him
If it’s not to late
But it is and he must go
Even if it was my choice
But it’s not
4 comments:
Fraser learn to spell
Besides that very interesting poem
I like how you did the poem in the perspective of the father
good poem The Fraz
to save him i think is the best line of the poem. you should say this would not be tolerated in canada instead of america
Fraz-Mgee, hows life
i like your poem but try not to ask so many questions. maybe put fewer with more meaning. also shoten the leangth
good job
Chris Locke
great poem i think you should change the line from "?american boy" to candaian boy. Try not to ask so many questions
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